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Aug
27th
2016

Second chapter of Don't Fear The Storm rewritten · 9:03pm Aug 27th, 2016

Added some 1000 words this time around. Didn't realize my writing was of such a low quality. No wonder Twilight-senpai never noticed me.

For an example of how things got changed, here's an old paragraph:

It was a diaper. If she was going to be honest, it might’ve felt a bit damp on the inside, and, of course, Twilight had seen immediately that she’d used it. She’d probably told the hospital staff to put her in one.

And here's the changed version:

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Aug
24th
2016

Changes to Don't Fear The Storm · 8:28pm Aug 24th, 2016

Small update:

Added a horror-tag to Don't Fear The Storm due to planned changes in the manuscript. I want to make this story more creepy than it currently is, contrasting it with the fluff of having a diapered Rainbow Dash. I kinda feel like doing that with MBS worked, so I want to go even further beyond with this one.

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